Thursday 24 February 2011

Sand Between My Toes

I hobble to the point where the last wave broke to rinse the sand from between my toes. Shoes and socks in my left hand, my right free to pick away the grains when the water rolls in.

The wave breaks. I fumble at my foot well enough and stretch the sock over the cold clean skin. Then straight down into its trainer, almost overbalancing as I plunge it into the hole.

I look up from the sea. Moira is lying on a hotel towel, just over fifty yards away, peaceful, probably asleep, a single still presence in the bedlam of the weekend beach.

Tonight I will ask her to marry me.

A second wave breaks.

I hadn't moved my foot. My shoe is filled; my sock is sodden.

Wednesday 16 February 2011

Clues

At the very bottom of the box, beneath a jumble of Leeds United caps, was the signed photograph of Lee Chapman, which he had collected outside Elland Road in May 1992.

It had taken him a lot longer to find it than he had expected.

He had been distracted for hours by the array of school photographs which he had encountered on the way, re-familiarising himself with his sixteen year-old hair and his six year-old glasses, looking along the lines of classmates and wondering how he had lost touch with so many of them so soon, at the ones who had already died and the ones who had already married, at the ones whom he sometimes saw across the road at Holborn and at the ones whom he had not seen at all since he was eighteen.

He had been distracted by the mountains of old exercise books, by the volumes and volumes of exuberant but indecipherable drawings which he had produced between the ages of four and six, by the books full of strange stories which he had written, by the short clumpy sentences and inexplicable spelling mistakes which marked their ages, the errors like the rings of a tree trunk guiding him back to their birthdates.

He had been distracted by the fragments, by the UCAS forms and exam certificates and CD racks and cuddly toys and poems and songs, which were written on scraps of paper and stuffed underneath piles of socks and shin pads and boots, by the hats which he had bought when he was fourteen, by the posters of once beloved rock stars now long-forgotten, by programmes and fliers and badges and folders and tickets and boxes and letters and cards, all providing clues, all adding to and solving the mystery of the story of his life.

Russian Dolls

Jennifer Parker scrolled back up to the top of the page and perused her composition. It was a fair assessment of an above-average entertainment, she thought. Not too generous, but not unkind by any means. She had picked up on all the obvious points of interest - the continuous use of iambic hexameter, the elaborately constructed overhead set, the controversial casting of Maxwell Dandy as the eponymous vivisectionist...

The content of her evaluation was not in question, but her chosen style would inevitably be a matter of concern. She hoped her reviewer would look kindly on her overuse of the semi-colon and the Oxford comma, and instead enjoy the smoothly continuous flow of her prose. Of course, his or her concerns would be affected by the spectre of his or her own reviewer, although surely that individual could not be too harsh for fear of being critiqued in turn.

Jennifer read through the piece one final time, then pressed "Send". The cogs of the critical machine creaked ever onwards.